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Filed by Andrew at November 3rd, 2011 under Other Posts



Good try at a broadcast lead, Andrew. You’re shooting for a present tense verb.
Rather than say later, “This happened…” you’ll need to be clear what “this” is: “The shooting.” The same at the end. Rather than “His whereabouts are still unknown,” remind me that it’s Richard who is on the run.

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