Mega City Mall Explosion

There was an explosion in the food court of Mega City Mall at 9:50 this morning.

Early responders on the scene reported that around 100 people sustained minor injuries as a result of the explosion and two people were pronounced dead at the scene by the local fire department. The names of the fatalities have yet to be released according to Captain Fuglsang.

One of the injured described some of the action on the scene. As mall custodian, Kaycie Strobl, recalled, “I was cleaning up some puke by one of the tables when something exploded. Something got in my leg and I have a concussion.” Strobl didn’t see anything suspicious leading up to the explosion.

Police and investigators have yet to find a cause for the explosion and are “still investigating all possible explanations,” as Captain Fuglsang reported. Homeland Security and local police stations have been notified of the incident.

The mall spokesman reported the incident was caught on video by security cameras, but the police have yet to access the video.

The mall evacuated immediately after the explosion. On duty mall Santa, Yuka Kotani, recalled, “I heard a loud sound from the explosion . . . I tried to protect the children and take them to the safe place.”

The spokesman for the mall announced the mall will be closed at least through this Saturday.

Public Relations- Polar Bear Story

Midland Zoo Mourns the Death of Polar Bear, Homer

Homer, a 16-year-old polar bear, passed away at Midland Zoo this morning.

A zoo keeper found Homer dead in his exhibit at 7:00 this morning, an hour after his feeding. The other polar bears, Yukon and McKenzie, were removed from the exhibit after this discovery and are being monitored by veterinary staff.

“We will do everything in our power to determine how this bear died. Animal welfare and the preservation of species are our primary goals here at the zoo,” zoo director Chris P. Bacon reassured.

Dr. Shanda Lear gave more insight into the zoo’s next steps. As she said, “The zoo will perform a necropsy to try to determine the cause of death. The results will not be available for several weeks.”

Polar bears have thrived at the zoo since 1985. Homer was the zoo’s oldest polar bear and his passing will be mourned by the staff at the zoo.

News Comment #14

When the Picky Eater Is a Grown-Up

Most people expect picky eaters to grow out of their eating habits when they get older, but what happens when they don’t? Adult picky eaters note that they feel uncomfortable in certain eating situations, feel anxious when pressed to eat things they don’t want to eat, and have other unpleasant experiences that stem from their selective eating habits. Seventy-five percent of adult picky eaters, have been experiencing this issue since childhood and some people have even began to seek help to reverse their selective eating habits.

This article caught my attention because I consider myself a picky eater. Although this article was attention grabbing, I wasn’t very happy with it. Not to sound insensitive, but the way portrayed some of the experiences of picky eaters in this article seemed a little extreme. They made it sound like the lives of these people are so much worse because they have selective eating habits, when it’s really not that pressing of an issue. I think in a way this might portray picky eaters in an even worse light by making them seem like cry babies.

I think the overall structure of this article worked well and everything flowed. The author of this article also made sure to include a wide variety of sources, which was good.

I thought it was good that the author made sure to include many examples of why some people find certain foods repulsive. From the smell all the way to its appearance.

I think this story has impact because there are many picky eaters worldwide, so there will always be somebody that can relate to this article.

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From Japan to Morningside College: Yuka Kotani (revised)

Fueled by passion, desire, and bravery, one of Morningside’s foreign exchange students explains why she chose to come to the U.S.

Twenty-year-old Yuka Kotani is originally from Osaka, Japan, but decided to fly across the world to attend two semesters at Morningside College. She started as a sophomore in January of this year and will leave at the end of this semester.

Many different factors influenced her decision to attend college here, two of which were her passions for Mass Communication and TV production (areas not offered at her university in Japan) and her desire to improve her English speaking skills. As she said, being here and speaking with native English speakers has helped her build her confidence in her own English speaking abilities, which is an opportunity she would not have gotten back home.

Yuka has encountered some academic struggles along the way. Homework is an issue from time to time as she works to understand the assignment and is hampered by her slow reading abilities. She has found ways to overcome some of these obstacles, however. For example, she has started recording some of her lectures so she can listen to them again after class and take things at her own pace.

Even though there have been obstacles along the way, Yuka feels that coming to Morningside College has benefited her in many ways. She was able to become more independent and has learned that she can survive on her own, has greatly improved her English speaking abilities, has had the opportunity to learn more about American culture, and has made new friends along the way.

When she returns to Japan, she is looking forward to sharing her college experience with her friends and family and telling them all of the benefits of studying abroad. She says Morningside College is now considered her second home.

News Comment #13

The kids aren’t all right: Educators grapple with post-election tensions

This article talked about the impact that the recent election has had on school age kids across the nation. Many kids, from elementary school all the way up to college, have become divided as a result of this election. A good portion of students are now feeling emboldened and aren’t afraid to discriminate and say rude/inappropriate things to other students. As a result, many educators are feeling the pressure to right this wrong and teach students that this kind of behavior is unacceptable.

I have seen a lot of posts about the election lately, most of which I scroll past, but this article caught my attention. I believe the headline of this article is intriguing and did a good job of luring me in. Ultimately, I think I liked the headline so much because it revealed another way this election has impacted the lives of Americans.

I believe the lead of this story is strong, it managed to touch on everything the article went on to talk about. I also believed the story flowed well and I liked that they incorporated quotes from students at the end. I believe adding these quotes at the very end will help the article linger with people longer.

I thought it was good that the story touched on the recent incidents that were both true and fabricated. Pointing out that some people were fabricating stories about acts of discrimination added another dimension to the story that I wouldn’t have otherwise thought about. It makes the jobs of educators that much harder when it comes to tackling this issue.

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News Comment #12

South Carolina Identifies Bodies Found on Suspect’s Property

Meagan Coxie and Johnny Coxie, a couple that had been missing for nearly a year, were finally found on suspect Todd Kohlhepp’s 95 acre property. The story doesn’t stop there however, as Kohlhepp has now been linked to several other serious crimes. For example, he confessed to killing four people at a motorcycle shop in 2003, kidnapping and imprisoning a woman by the name of Kala Brown, murdering a man named Charles Carver, and the list goes on.

The title of this story caught my interest because it’s not something I stumble across every day. As it turns out, the New York Times has actually covered this story multiple times and is just posting updates of Kohlhepp’s story as they receive more information.

I believe that the main factors that makes this story newsworthy are uniqueness and timeliness. I believe this story is unique because it’s not often you see murder mysteries on news websites such as the New York Times. It’s also obvious that this story is timely because it was just posted yesterday as an update of one of the stories they had ran earlier this week. This makes it clear that they’re posting new information as soon as they’re receiving it.

This story flows pretty well and I like that they ended on a crime Kohlhepp had committed years before. I believe it was smart to end on that note to show how Kohlhepp, somebody that has been a dangerous criminal for years, is finally getting convicted for his crimes and the world is now a safer place because of it.

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Story #3

Welcome to KMSC News. My name is Maggie Ganley and here are the stories for the night.

ODK celebrated its 10th anniversary of Into the Streets earlier this month with close to 900 volunteers.

ODK is an honor society on campus that started Into the Streets 10 years ago. When asked about why Into the Streets was created, Leslie Werden, one of the professors involved with Into the Streets, said the honor society wanted to quote” create a service project that would involve the entire campus” end quote.

Tracy Gates is the Co Vice-President for the Into the Streets committee. When asked how she felt about this year’s event, she said quote, “I think that this year’s event was a success… and, from most of our feedback, the volunteers did an awesome job and were greatly appreciated by the community” end quote.

Because of the spirit of getting involved, Werden sees this event lasting long into the future.

Speaking of students getting involved, many students made sure to participate in the Halloween events around campus last week.

Many Halloween oriented activities were offered around campus this year. Events such as trick-or-treating in Dimmitt, pumpkin painting in Yockey, and a scavenger hunt in the Plex really helped students release stress and give in to their inner kid.

When Jenny Mansfield, one of the residents in Dimmitt, reflected upon Halloween, she said it was entertaining. “You get a lot of strange looks, especially if you were dressed up in a wig like I was.”

Strange looks aside, Jenny was not alone. Many students made sure to get dressed up and get their “spook on”.

However, people dressed up as ghouls and monsters haven’t been the only scary things around campus.

Over the last few weeks, there have been reports of safety issues. One incident involved teenagers patrolling campus with airsoft guns, another involved people terrorizing a residence hall.

I spoke to Madison Schueth, a resident of the Plex, who reported issues such as people tapping on windows at night and stalking the building from the parking lot.

After staking out the Plex, campus security was finally able to catch the perpetrators and put the issue to rest.

Issues like this are fairly common and arise once every couple of months. As the head of campus security, Brett Lyon, noted, it’s usually people off campus that cause security concerns.

Security problems are impossible to avoid, but campus security makes sure to stay engaged and tackle issues as they arise.

However, don’t just rely on campus security to stay safe, hold yourself reliable as well. He left us with one important takeaway message. “It’s not just a security thing, it’s an us thing. Safety is everybody’s responsibility. So if you see something, say something.”

Thanks for joining me for this news update. My name is Maggie Ganley and I’ll see you next time.

News Comment #11

‘Going Flat’ After Breast Cancer

More and more women are making the choice to “go flat” after having breast cancer. Many doctors push patients to get reconstructive surgery done on their breasts after going through breast cancer (so much so that some patients don’t even know that “going flat” is an option). This is because most doctors see reconstructive surgery as a way to make women “feel whole again”. However, the women featured in this article objected to the idea of reconstructive surgery and had their own stories to tell. Some of these women couldn’t fathom the idea of having reconstructed breasts because of their appearance, while others were worried about the risk of infection. This article is not meant to say that “going flat” is the choice to make, but to let women know that this is even an option.

I actually really, really liked this article. It flowed well and I was impressed by the number of quotes the author incorporated. I believe the extensive use of quotes definitely gave the article a more personal feel by allowing the reader to see into the minds of breast cancer survivors. Along the same lines, I also enjoyed the incorporation of pictures and the size of these pictures. If the pictures had been smaller, they would have seemed less important and definitely wouldn’t have made as much of an impact.

The lead and the following paragraph definitely had impact. I believe these paragraphs effectively dived right into the topic by giving a real life example of why a breast cancer survivor might turn down reconstructive surgery. I especially liked the quote in the second paragraph because it brought up a very valid point (“Having something foreign in my body after a cancer diagnosis is the last thing I wanted”). People with cancer often feel like they have a foreign invader inside their body that is constantly finding ways to kill them, why would they want another foreign body inside of them?

The paragraphs in this article were a bit longer at times, but I believe that is excusable when you consider the number of quotes and statistics that were included. Also, I didn’t find the article any harder to read when I hit some of the longer paragraphs.

This article definitely plays on human interest. I’m sure a lot of people would be interested in learning about this new phenomenon (especially if they personally know breast cancer survivors) and would like to read a happy, feel-good article such as this.

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Couple Shoot Story

A wedding ended in disaster this weekend when pent-up aggression turned into gun violence. With more information on the story, here’s Emma Miller.

A man shot his wife shortly after they exchanged their wedding vows on Saturday.

Richard and Laurette Bronson were married on the front porch of their home at 617 Black St.

As Vicki Holmes, a neighbor of the Bronson’s, said, “It looked like everything was going really good… Everybody seemed to be having so much fun. They seemed like a happy couple.”

However, things soon took a turn for the worse during the wedding reception.

Police spokesman, Sergeant Mann, reported, “The shooting occurred at 5 p.m. It happened after she threw a plate of wedding reception macaroni salad at him.”

The shooting came as a shock to many. As one of the neighbors, Michael Martin, said, “I’ve never seen him violent, never heard them yelling, it blows me away.”

Richard Brunson had disappeared by the time the police arrived at the scene and is still at large. Laurette Brunson is *recovering from her shot to the abdomen* in St. Luke’s Hospital.

*The part in the asterisks was added after the recording.

Quotes and Attribution

Don Juan, lady killer? No, music producers.

John Dodge and Don Cooper, the members of Don Juan, began producing music about three years ago. Over the years, they have been trying to build this as their main profession.

They said that it was initially difficult to “shuck the robe of responsibility” and turn from traditional, stable jobs to a career writing and producing music. Cooper mentions that he’s keeping a teaching job just in case his music career falls through.

Even though they sometimes experience financial concerns, creative tension, and fight with one another, both Dodge and Cooper agree that it’s worth it.

They’re recording this spring and hope to have their music on the radio by the end of the summer.