Dayne
Dayne is from Kansas City, Missouri and he had come to Sioux City for college. The question at hand, was asking about a life changing experience. He had told me “coming to college, and to be on scholarship” had changed his life severely. His freshman year of college he had played football on scholarship but later into his sophomore and junior year he fell ineligible for academic reasons. Thinking to transfer his junior year to play football, time flew by to quick and he missed his deadline.
Majoring in Biology his freshman year, he switched it to Mass Comm. He was not happy with the direction Biology was taking him, saying “I felt like I wasn’t getting anywhere, Mass Comm. was more meaningful to me.” Loving to edit, he will post videos to Youtube about could include highlight videos from basketball games.
You could still use your knowledge of leads to begin with something a bit more newsworthy: A Morningside sophomore is trying to get his academics in order.
Verb structure. Drop the “had” and just go with simple past tense.
Proofread — give it a once over — before you hit “publish.”