Sep 08 2022
Lead 1: Plane Crash
Thursday night a TWA jet crashed while taking off at the Kennedy International Airport. Of the 45 passengers and crew members on board, 5 did not make it through the crash. There is no further information yet on how this tragedy could happen.
Two of the passengers included an associate professor of rural sociology, John Dumont, and associate professor of English George Johnson, both being from Backwater State University. They were separately returning from conferences in New York. Luckily, both professors survived and even escaped injury.
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Five passengers dies Thursday when a TWA jet crashed while taking off at the Kennedy International Airport.
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BSU professors John Dumont and George Johnson survived the crqsh.