Rewriting the lead Born to Drive

A women driving a taxi at night would scare most girls to death, but not Kris Evans. The Iowa City native of over a decade isn’t scare of anything, “I’m a big woman.” Evans, drives the night shift wearing her leather jacket and black pants every night for Old Capital Cab service.

 

Most people would laugh at the thought of a night shift taxi driver, but not Kris Evans. The Iowa City 25 year old was born to drive the streets of her hometown and loves every minute of her job.

One thought on “Rewriting the lead Born to Drive

  1. fuglsang

    These could work as “contrast” leads, Hunter, Be aware you don’t need to pack a lot of info in the first graf (unlike news leads). Get the readers’ attention first. Then the details.

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