Rewriting the Lead

The lead drew me in because mysteries draw people in and you want to see if you are right on whether predator or prey or find out more about something that interest you. It works because it leaves a question in your head and you are curious about what is going on within the article. “Predator or Prey to J.D. Salinger?”

One thought on “Rewriting the Lead

  1. fuglsang

    From what you said in class I got the impression you thought the lead was confusing. I thought the lead was OK, but essays (like this one) are different from news/feature stories.

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