2. The most difficult part of the story for me was trying to make it seem like an article and to make it seem like a research paper. I’ve always done papers based of research and just inform and talk about it. I have never had to make it interesting.

3. One specific revision I made was trying to make it not sound like it was from my perspective. I took out all the times I said “I” in my paper. I also fixed it so it wouldn’t say things such as, from this article I found out blank.