This is a shooting story, Brittany, that’s the news. You actually have an excellent lead: A story book wedding turned violent. That would make me listen. Cover the details of the wedding after reporting the shooting.
Good lead in to the first quote, but ID the speaker at some point.
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This is a shooting story, Brittany, that’s the news. You actually have an excellent lead: A story book wedding turned violent. That would make me listen. Cover the details of the wedding after reporting the shooting.
Good lead in to the first quote, but ID the speaker at some point.