News Comment 10/1

September 30th, 2020

The Story on ESPN about the Las Vegas Raiders players slipping up and not wearing masks at an event caught my attention this week. The NFL has been cracking down on people who are not wearing masks on the field or off the field at events.

Earlier this week the coach of the Raiders was fined $100,000 for not wearing his masks on the sideline correctly. They were also fined for having unauthorized personal in their locker room after the Sept 21st game. Making this event even that more interesting to read about.

The story in general was ok it used a lot of quotes from the players that were involved stating they were sorry. While they were also trying to back up themselves of why they took the masks off at the event. I can’t really can’t complain about this article because it is really written well. Also liking the transition from each piece of information that make it go together really well.


One Response to “News Comment 10/1”

  1. fuglsang on October 2, 2020 3:35 pm

    Glad you’re looking for the transitions, Tyler.

    An example of a “teacher” story. Part of its purpose is to encourage masks… by everyone, not just players.

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