News comment 2 (9.9)

This article is about the massively known pregame show know has college day headed for Ames, Iowa for the second time in two years for the CY-Hawk game between Iowa and Iowa State. The announcement came following Iowa’s dominant performance over Indiana and Iowa State barely sneaking a win out over inferior opponent of UNI. The article concludes with summaries of the last couple of meetings between Iowa and Iowa State. The article states that Iowa has won 5 of the last meetings in a row and the fact that the game wasn’t played last year due to covid. Compared to “normal” or national wide sports news this is massive for those in the state of Iowa because of the national televised show being in Ames and the proximity to Sioux City. Also, the article gives a show start time and a game start for those who may want to go to the game. While the article is short it’s important to get the information out to as many people as possible.

One thought on “News comment 2 (9.9)

  1. fuglsang

    I sense some Iowa bias here, Jacob. You added some spin to the DI’s info.
    The lead is fine, but does make assumptions about what readers know. Like, “What is Gameday?”
    OK, though more commenting would be choice.

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