Sensory Details- Chocolate straw

The chocolate straw looks like a brown small branch you would find in your front yard as a child. Or a cigar you would see an Italian mob member smoke in all of the old movies. The texture on my hands reminds me of a piece of construction paper, but the texture on my tongue starts hard but eventually gets smooth while the chocolate melts in my mouth. while I chew on the straw it sounds like I am chewing on a potato chip, guessing many people around me can hear the crunch in my mouth.

Comments

  1. fuglsang says

    I like the “stick” metaphor. Cigars is better, especially with the mobster image. Good use of sensory detail.

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