Richard Brunson, 50, is on the run after he shot his newlywed wife with a 22 calibre handgun at 5pm. Richard and Laurette Brunson married at 2 pm, just before the shooting. The ceremony took place at the house the couple had been living in together.
According to officials, Mr. Brunson shot his wife after she threw a plate of macaroni salad on him at the wedding reception.
There were over 30 family members, including Mrs. Brunson’s children, who attended the wedding.
We were able to talk to some of the family members once we arrived on scene.
According to Martin, relation unknown
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We also spoke to a female, relation also unknown, her response made it evident that she was more focussed on the children
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Brunson is still yet to be found. However, if you see a man without shoes or a shirt around the area of 617 Black street. Please call the authorities.
That second graf is really good, Tatum. It highlights the most current info. I would suggest a third graf that lists Laurette’s condition before you go into the “story” of the shooting. You don’t include that info, so you’re going to have listeners thinking she’s dead.
You have the attribution before the quote. Good. But I’ve always been partial to “colon” introductions, like you have with the second source. That way you don’t have that moment of hesitation between “said” and the beginning of the soundbite.