You need a lead, Sarah. Tell me the news before jumping into the story. The facts you use are fine, but tell me what’s important — Laurette was shot but is recovering; police are looking for the shooter. Then go into how it all happened. Introduce and ID speakers before the actuality.
You need a lead, Sarah. Tell me the news before jumping into the story. The facts you use are fine, but tell me what’s important — Laurette was shot but is recovering; police are looking for the shooter. Then go into how it all happened. Introduce and ID speakers before the actuality.