September 16, 2010

Sioux City man dies in crash. The crash occurred at 11 a.m yesterday 2 miles east of Sioux City.  Man was killed after colliding with another driver.  He is survived by his wife  who was along in the car along and is in “fair” condition.  The other driver  is in “critical” condition.

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  1.   fuglsang said:

    Why don’t you want to identify Moyer (from South Sioux)?

    A South Sioux City man died in a two-car crash yesterday. Moyer Quick, 65, … Then tell me about the injuries. Then tell me how it happened.

    Was it hard to write in class?