Archive for December, 2010

Paper Improvment

Monday, December 13th, 2010

The one thing that has changed in my papers from the summer to now is my punctuation and transitions. My grammar and punctuation wasn’t terrible, but not great. My transitions however, were not that good. They needed some work and it has gotten better. I have gotten better at commas, ending punctuation, and within sentences punctuation. My transitions have gotten better by leading into the next paragraph and ending paragraphs. I am really happy that I have gotten better at this. I feel better about writing now. I was always a good writer, meaning it was my strong area, but there is always room for improvement and I got it. I feel like it really is one of my strong areas. J

Homecoming Week

Wednesday, December 8th, 2010

So for the out of class events that we had to do were a lot of fun for me. I did my two during homecoming week. One of the things that I had fun with were the hena tattoos. I got two. I got a symbol that meant family and a morningside mustang one. My family flipped when I told them as well as my coach but then I told them and they calmed down. It was so funny. Another one was the homecoming game. It was pretty amazing and wierd. We won by so much. It was great. Of course it rained then stopped and then rained and stopped and then rained and stopped. Crazy. FUN WEEK!:)

What I would change about my paper

Wednesday, December 1st, 2010

I would change anything that was bad. I mean I know that I do not have the best paper, but I have not had very many bad comments. Yes, I do need to work on my job on bringing everything together more clearly and to make it more formal, but other than that I do not think that there is anything else. Yep! 🙂