A Negative Classroom Experience-
On Tuesday September 27th I got the privilege to interview Ben Steffens about a negative classroom experience. He did not have too many but when he was in class last year being his junior year when, “he thought there was a gunshot right next door” but that it turns out “it was some chick who fell through the door”
I had a good chuckle on this because he said the chick fell through the door. Afterwards he got informed that “her whole backpack was covered in blood and she had to go get 28 stitches”. That shocked me because I couldn’t imagine just walking and falling through a glass door and getting so severely injured.
Just an everyday walk from class could turn into your next nightmare.
Again, as with most everything in this class, including yourself in the story is not needed. It’s a story about Ben.
“Chick” can be used in a quote if someone says it. That tells the reader a lot about the speaker’s character. But for you as the writer? More revealing.
Maybe start with the last line. Where does that take you?