Plane Crash
When a returning flight Thursday night from New York City was taking off the plane has crashed at Kennedy International Airport. There was a confirmed total of forty-five passengers aboard including crew members. Five of the Forty-five people aboard were killed in the crash and several were injured. Two professors from Backwater State University were in the crash and remain unscathed, the people have yet to hear their response to what has occurred on Kennedy International Airport.
Curriculum Changes
Blackwater State Universities president David French has announced changes in the graduation requirements. French’s new changes are as follows: Students entering next fall (2023) must take one math, computer science, and foreign language course. French states, “We feel that these new course requirements will allow us to turn out better–educated persons.”
Arest
Cathy Wensen a 22–year–old senior homecoming queen, cheerleader and straight–A student was arrested for driving under the influence of alcohol, third time in six months, last night. Cathy is daughter of locally prominent attorney Jim Wensen, 211 Green Grove Drive and her mother Sharon Wensen lives in Ontario, Canada. Cathy was going to go to Vanderbilt University for graduate study in biology but will this arrest change her options?
For all of these you need paragraph breaks, Jax. You can’t just throw all the info together and expect readers to make sense of it all. You need to help.
The curriculum story is mostly OK.
The question in the arrest story is snark. Don’t do that.
Plane crash: Don’t make stuff up. Stick to the facts you’re given.