2. The most difficult part of writing this paper was the organization. I wanted to stay to the point, but there were other aspects that I thought were interesting and that connected to the main story. I ended up leaving them in because I thought it added to the story to give some background and outside the NFL news.
3. One specific revision I made was adding the attributions. In my first draft, I don’t think I had any. After rereading and editing, I added them where they were necessary in places such as quotes. It was somewhat difficult to add good attributions, though, because from the articles I read they weren’t very specific. They would just say things like “NFL media”.