News Comment #6

Jose Fernandez died Sunday morning in a boating accident late in the night on the coast of Miami after finding out his girlfriend was pregnant and he went out on the boat to celebrate with two friends. Jose Fernandez left the baseball world and sports world in shock. It made think about Jose’s legacy. Jose, a 24 year old, no where near ready to be put in the Hall of Fame. Jose may not have been a hall of famer, but he did leave a lasting legacy on the game of baseball. Baseball is in a time of dyer need for some personality, or fun. People say that Jose had fire. Jose pitched with a sense or cockiness which him fun to watch. Jose, when no pitching, would sit in the dugout and have a good time in front of the camera, he would dance, and he would also be cheering for the Marlins teams louder then any fan. Jose may be gone, but his legacy will live on forever. Overall this article is great no matter if you are a sports fan or not. This article will touch your heart and make you feel a certain way about sports that you haven’t felt in years. I would recommend this article to anybody and everybody. This article relates to the class because it is written with very short, and concise sentences and has pictures and videos in between paragraphs so you can see what they are talking about.

http://www.espn.com/mlb/story/_/id/17649775/jose-fernandez-reminded-us-all-good-baseball

One thought on “News Comment #6

  1. fuglsang

    A lot of people have been commenting on how this death is a big
    loss for baseball. It has a weird lead. The first graf has potential,
    but then the next two grafs seem off topic.

    Proofread.

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