Jacob Freeman claimed that one word that could accurately describe him would be perfectionist. Whether that is a good thing or a bad thing, Freeman is still trying to figure that out.
Freeman decided to pursue an internship over the summer. At this company, Freeman discovered that this internship made him work harder on himself because he always redid his work until he thought if met his standard.
At this job, it taught him many strategic strategies that has opened his eyes into the field of marketing.
This has helped him in his classes here on campus.
In his final presentation in his marketing class, Freeman said “I deleted my presentation five times because I didn’t think it met my standards” showing this perfectionist side.
Freeman enjoys producing great work and plans on revising his technique to be more efficient with his time.
This is close, Dylan, but you need more story. You could use a story
from the internship, or maybe more on the presentation. Why did
the ppt take so many tries?