Objective

Two guys walking by, both in cargo shorts but one with a black shirt and the other with a white shirt and hat. Five trees moves from the wind. A shadow from a building covers parts of the grass. Vehicles fill all the parking spots. Two girls, one wearing jeans with a purple shirt the other in leggings and a peach shirt. The sound of a fan blowing air into a room is heard. A car horn honked. A girl in blue shorts with a green stripe on the side and a white t-shirt runs across the grass to a car. Three more girls walked by, one wearing blue shorts with a grey top, another in black shorts with a grey top, and the last in green shorts with a dark grey. A green car drives up and parks on the side of the road and a red truck passes it. The green car leaves driving forwards. The building is made out of bricks of different shades of reds and browns. The window trimming is a brown. There is a stone bench by a tree. A guy in white gym shorts and a green t-shirt walks by on the sidewalk to an entrance door.

Subjective

It is a quiet cool evening, not many people walking by just a few here and there. It is an uneventful evening, slightly boring with the lack of activities. The loud fan nearby is blowing air to cool off the room. Two girls walk slow to the door of the building, like they are tired. They look like athletes with their athletic shorts and cut off t-shirts. A guy on a unicycle rides by, he looks off balance and struggling to keep from falling over. The five tree are pretty for early September, with their purplish red leaves that look cool. A loud girlish scream that hurts to hear is heard. Sounds like some girl just received bad news or was scared of something. There is a bench that looks hard and uncomfortable to sit in near a purple leaved tree. The grass is green  and looks soft. It also looks like it is watered often to keep the lively green color.



5 Responses to “Objective and Subjective”

  1.   fuglsang Says:

    The objective is mainly visual, which isn’t unusual. Images can be concrete, while what we perceive with other senses will differ person to person. You also focus on clothes. Could that be grouped into something? College fashion statements? With the subjective, remember to show in addition to telling. What makes someone athletic? What does hard and uncomfortable look/feel like? I’m curious about the unicyclist.

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