Post on September 15th, 2016
by Kaycie
- What was the *most* difficult part of writing this paper? For me the most difficult part about writing this paper was trying not to include my opinion. About 90% of the papers I’ve written in my life include my opinion on the subject because that’s what I enjoy writing about and since I do get bothered about this topic it was hard not to write an opinion. I even wrote a couple in subconsciously.
- Describe in detail at least one specific revision you made and explain how it made your paper more effective. In my first draft I started my lead with a very convincing quote in my opinion. Apparently the class that I missed on Tuesday had a whole big thing about how you shouldn’t start a lead off with a quote or that it is rare, so of course I changed my lead drastically. In the end it did make the lead more effective because it got straight to the points and shortened my lead.
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