Response to Article #1
In paper #1, I put the most amount of effort into pacing my story. I tried to make it seem like the story was fluid and moved from graf to graf with ease. I wish I put more effort into finding interesting articles. I feel like the story could have been better if I used stronger arguments and quotes from different articles.
The most difficult part of making this article was finding information. At a certain point, most information seemed redundant, so this limited the depth of my story without being redundant or being off topic.