News comment 12? I think– 11/29
So, apparently Guantanamo Bay inmates may be placed in normal prisons around the nation. It would appear that the proposition that was opposed by Congress may in fact come to volition.
I think this article fits the conservative audience well. This is something that many conservatives would oppose, i would assume. The article revolves around Feinstein, who is not exactly Miss Popular in conservative eyes. The lede is one extremely long, run on sentence that goes forever without ever taking a break or using a comma or anything like that. I think it could be shortened, but i’m sure for the sake of writing more, more was used. I’ve also noticed the author of the article has been writing pieces about democrats lately; which is kind of interesting.
December 4th, 2012 at 3:07 PM
The rules for the internet are similar to those for print. Shorter sentences preferred. Your brain can only hold to so much info before it starts to get confused.