Good lead, Derrick. Good summary of the events, though you should note that Laurette is alive and doing fine. Otherwise people might assume she’s dead. Nicely done overall.
You’ll want to project a bit more with your voice. I’m assuming you were keeping your voice down in the library for this assignment.
Good lead, Derrick. Good summary of the events, though you should note that Laurette is alive and doing fine. Otherwise people might assume she’s dead. Nicely done overall.
You’ll want to project a bit more with your voice. I’m assuming you were keeping your voice down in the library for this assignment.
fuglsang 11.08.11 @ 9:07 pm