Before I left for class this morning, I spoke with one of my roommates about what his plans were for today.
Brenick Hoppe, an accounting major here at Morningside, was sitting at the table eating banana bread and working on an assignment due at noon.
Hoppe had just gotten a haircut yesterday, so I complimented him on his nice cut.
I asked him what he was planning on doing today. Hoppe told me he had a class later and then practice after that. He also said he probably wouldn’t see me until tonight as I was really busy today as well.
OK. The banana bread is a nice detail. Where was the table? How was the light? Consider what readers might want to know.