Alexis: Good energy. Nicely conversational.
Almost Maine: Good lead. “Going down”! Nicely described.
End with the ticket info. Move the quote higher, and you need to identify the speaker. You transition into the next story pretty well, but not so well into the Pizza Ranch story.
Elevate: Good adaptation of the print story.
Pizza Ranch: Ok. Maybe a bit long, but good quotes. Well organized.
Three live quotes. 3:00
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