Last night at approximately 8:30 p.m., two men entered BJ’s Drug armed. One held a gun on owner, Barney Joseph Jr., and the other removed money from the cash register.
Barney Joseph Jr., age 43 and owner of BJ’s Drug, was working a typical shift when two men wearing ski masks entered the store. One of the men held a gun on Joseph, and the other removed $382.65 from the cash register. The fled in a car that was parked in the front of the store.
Joseph did not resist. His father was shot and killed during a holdup at the same store 25 years ago.
“Yes, Dad resisted, I guess. Anyway, they found him shot to death, his own gun in his hand, and a bullet in the store’s ceiling. I’d rather part with my money than my life,” Joseph said.
The WHEN is not the critical fact here, Mandi:
Two men robbed BJ’s Drug at gun point last night.
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