Descriptive Writing

In our class activity, we were given the option between a carrot, blueberry, and mint. I chose the blueberry. I ended up picking a big, round blueberry. I ate the blueberry and it had a very squishy texture. It was instantly crushed in my mouth once I started chewing. The outside layer of the blueberry was a lot more firm than the inside.

I was then given a twinkie. I had never had one before. The wrapper makes a loud noise when opening the bag. The twinkie has a round, rectangular shape. It looks like it has a spongy and moist texture. Once I took a bite, I was surprised to see that it had filling in it. The outside is spongy and then the inside is smooth. I really enjoyed eating the twinkie. It reminded me of the bakery my dad would take me and my siblings to every Sunday.



1 Comment so far

  1.   fuglsang on October 21st, 2022

    OK on sensory detail. The last sentence
    would be a nice place to take off and
    reminisce about Sundays with family.

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