I did my article review on Nasa’s Artemis 1. I learned a lot about writing leads and how to organize different sources into one essay for this first Article Review.

During the writing process, I put a lot of thought into the organization. I originally had it organized chronologically. It was easy to take information from all three sources and relate them together. I wanted to make sure that I included all the interesting information from all three of my sources. I tried to organize it in a way that would keep the reader entertained and wanting to read more.

One thing I struggled with was making sure that the details were at the bottom of the review. I originally thought that the details went with the paragraphs at the top, because they relate. I learned through feedback that you can circle back to it at the end. The reader will probably only read the first part of it and if they are entertained they will continue to read.

I did my best to move the details to the bottom of the review. I also worked on improving my lead and making it entertaining. I would say I was pretty successful with moving details to the end of the review, but I could still work on improving my leads.