Broadcast Story

November 15, 2012 in Uncategorized | 1 comment

Here’s Lauren:

Final Broadcast

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    fuglsang on November 26, 2012 at 2:55 am

    Lauren: Social media story translates pretty well to audio. Work on leading into your quotes. Rather than leading in with a “X said…” try using a phrase that ends in a colon: “…and Sorenson had this to say: …”

    Amputations? Your transitions between this story and the next is OK, but remind me at the end of the amputation story what I was supposed to get out of it. Why is that news again?

    The song is OK, but as with the other stories, hit me (again) with the main point before moving on.

    Three of three sources. 3:30.

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