If you start right off with the names, some people are going to miss it. Get the listeners’ attention before giving key details: A Sioux City couple’s wedding day ended with gunfire this afternoon…. Then go into important facts, then re-create the scene. OK on introduction of sources. Organization OK.
If you start right off with the names, some people are going to miss it. Get the listeners’ attention before giving key details: A Sioux City couple’s wedding day ended with gunfire this afternoon…. Then go into important facts, then re-create the scene. OK on introduction of sources. Organization OK.