Article 2: rough draft
Gas Prices Ripping Holes in Wallets
By Cammy Ly
Oct. 8, 2012—these past years, Americans have been suffering the effects and aftermath from recession and war. People find it hard to afford the luxury they use to buy when the economy was still doing well. Actually, people find it even hard to get anything they want nowadays because the prices on everything have been changing so much.
Now, prices on everything, from necessities to luxury items are skyrocketing. Even prices on food changed, such as milk, which use to cost 1 to 2 dollars but now cost almost 4 dollars. It is ridiculous how much money everything at stores cost. However, no price on any item beats one particular item that every adult and student dread to get every week or less: gas.
Gas prices is one that fluctuates more than the weather outside, one day it is $3.69 and the next it could drop down to $3.50 or go up to $3.86. It’s a hit or miss when shopping for gas, what’s even more painful is the gas price constantly change every so often in a day. For example, in the morning it could cost $3.25 while in the afternoon the price could raise up to $3.65.
These gas prices are killing people’s pocket change or side money. It’s so hard to find a gas station that has cheap gas, if there’s such thing as cheap gas anymore. One Morningside student, a commuter and a soon to be married man, is also affected by the gas prices:
“Gas prices are so expensive now,” said Chris Eickholt.
If gas prices continue to rise up and possibly rise to the point where they were four almost 5 dollars like last year, how will people such as Eickholt be able to survive.
However, commuter students aren’t the only people affected by these expensive gas prices. Residents of the college also suffer from the gas prices especially when they are active in sports. Kelsey Nelson, a resident and golf player of Morningside College, also feels the same pain as Eickholt.
“It’s expensive for me during the Fall and Spring than in the Winter because I have golf,” said Nelson.
It is understandable since travelling for tournaments, as a player on the team is normal. Nevertheless, the distance and on top of trying to pay for the gas to get there can be a hassle. Life can be difficult when the places you can’t go to the places you need or want to go because you don’t have the gas for it.
According to Eickholt, he thought that not only gas was expensive, but also the prices would aggravate the people who have to purchase gas. “Gas prices should have a cap… like they should have a stopping point where the prices doesn’t go any higher,” suggested Eickholt, which isn’t disagreeable at all.
Too bad gas prices won’t return to the price of $2 anytime soon, guess everyone will have to put up with the current prices.
October 9th, 2012 at 3:59 pm
It is a good story. There is one place you forgot a comma though. It is is the third to last paragraph, last sentence. Other than that I liked it. Good Job! 🙂
October 9th, 2012 at 3:59 pm
Overall I think the topic of your story is very good. It is certainly one that affects most students and faculty if not all. Since gas prices do affect more than just students here on campus maybe another good interview for you to do would be a teacher or other faculty member. You have a lot of good information about gas prices in your story but I think you should mention them somewhere in your lead so people know what you will be discussing. Other than that maybe dig a little deeper with your interviews and see what specifically they are having to make cuts on in order to afford gas. You provided a lot of information about your topic and it was interesting to read.
October 9th, 2012 at 11:39 pm
Ok, Cammy, but you’re doing a lot of tellingrather than explaining. Try to ask questions that get you sources to discuss how prices have affected them. Have they stopped buying bread and milk? You could also offer some explanation for why prices have gone up… Research.
cut the first two grafs, you’re backing in. Just get to the point: gas prices. The first quote from Chris isn’t very interesting. Don’t let your sources get by with easy answers.
Did you talk to anyone who doesn’t drive and hasn’t been affected?