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Comm 208 Shooting
October 30th, 2012
The honeymoon phase didn’t last long for Richard Brunson and Laurette Kenny Brunson. They were married at 2:00 pm on Saturday. Richard shot his wife in the abdomen at 5:00 that evening.
Neighbor Michael Martin commented
The couple had been living together for four or five months before the wedding. The bride’s three children were at the house when this incident happened. Laurette is in St. Luke’s hospital in satisfactory condition.
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You could include a few more details, but I like that first bit. But cut “phase.” A honeymoon is a honeymoon.
Cut the dead space at the beginning of the soundbite.