Good Morning America Story

I only read the first 8 words of the headline and I was hooked! The headline was better then the lead! Other then the story being cute and the readers kind of figuring that out as the read it I think what made it even better was the first quote was the letter the brother wrote to Santa. So it was written as if it wrote it, the spelling was how he had it and the grammar was how he had it. That direct quote brought so much more meaning and feelings to this story then any of the many quotes that were used. It just pulled all emotion out of you when reading it and you were hooked to read the rest. It was all just perfect, and made it so much better. That quote made the story. It wouldn’t have been as touching if the writer didn’t put that in the article.