News Comment 2

September 8, 2022

Solar Foods wants to replace industrial animal farming with a high-tech protein harvest https://techcrunch.com/2022/09/05/solar-foods-solein/

The article felt more like a history lesson then a story about high tech protein harvests. The article was supposed to be about new crops replacing the meat industry, and fulfilling the need for protein in the human diet.

The article was structured poorly, the beginning was historical stuff the reader might not be interested in and doesn’t talk about the company in question until the second paragraph. The article was also very wordy and could use some widdling down the word count. Also the author doesn’t seem very educated on the topic, they aren’t breaking down phrases it seems they are just regurgitating facts.

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