Amber Burg's Blog

I was curious of this article because of the picture and what the title suggested they were doing with robots. It just caught my attention.

The lead made me curious as to what could actually go wrong? I don’t exactly know what they are talking about but it makes me curious. I like all the different quotes from scientists and parts of the presentations they gave there at the conference. It gave the who was talking at the conference and the what they were talking about.

It is slow getting to the point, it gives a lot of non-important leading into what the article is about. I feel like it goes off on military information which doesn’t seem on topic at the begin. If it was moved towards the end to show how robots behave and may have better ethics than human soldiers or just deleted out of the article. I would of moved the paragraph about the robotics conference to the beginning so that readers know what this is about. They need more information on why this was taking place and what is going to happen with all of the use of robots. I wanted to know more of what robots are capable at this moment and what they plan on using them for in the future.

Read it here. 

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