In the last 2-3 years, I went to my elementary school, Don Bosco Vitthaya School, after I and my couple of friends finished having eating barbecue together. This idea literally came up in my head that I would really want to see and surround the educational institution late at night time which was really like ghost hunting more or less, but I was going to be disrespectful to the place or somebody else at all. In fact, we had a purpose to visit there due to one of my friends forgot his project over there, so it was the right moment to do both things we desired. Before we got into the place, there was a security came to have a conversation to make sure we were not going to do some stupid things that led to damage to the school, also he said “Don’t dare to reach the football field, if you guys want to have any trouble afterward” we all were confused with the words he said but we didn’t ask him a depth detail. After we got a scary story from an old security man, we headed to the grandstand where was near a football field but along the way we were going there we met a group of boarding students who were doing their assignments under the building. It reminded me of the moment that I did as same as they did when I was a child although it was not too late like this, nothing has changed at all since I left this school. And whenever my friend found his stuff, we went back to our home without anything bad happening that night.
I intended for you to base the description on something you did “now” rather than in the past. It’s difficult to remember specific details now.
Your story is a story, I guess, but it doesn’t have the descriptive elements I was looking for. For example, what did people look like? Was it hot? Cold? Windy? What was different at night compared to the day?