October 31, 2019 by Samuel 1 Comment
November 5, 2019 at 7:10 pm
Either you or Hailey made some nice changes to the text. It read smoothly. An OK lead. Good sentence length.
Given the time, you could include something on the hazards of plastic in the oceans.
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