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Aliens may not exist in CIA’s records. Edward Snowden, former employee of the CIA, reveals that aliens aren’t in CIA’s records after search.

While talking on a podcast, Snowden said: “I had ridiculous access to the networks of the NSA, the CIA, the military, all these groups. I couldn’t find anything.”

Although not being able to find aliens; Snowden did find evidence of the moon landing. “In case you were wondering: Yes, man really did land on the moon.”

1 Comment

  1. fuglsang

    The throwaway lead is OK, Riley, but you don’t want the two leads to say exactly the same thing. Try to make them complementary.

    The CIA may not be interested in investigating aliens.
    Former CIA contractor Edward Snowden said he found no evidence of aliens in CIA files.

    I like the last graf. Before that, though, in a third graf, provide some explanation why the listener should care that there are no files.

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