Tasty Ice Cream Treats!

30 08 2012

Blue Bunny ice cream treats are a way to get any hungry person’s attention that likes ice cream.  Ice cream treats can be messy, tasty, a surprise, and a good treat all at the same time.  As Ross came into class today, he had our attention with boxes of ice cream. No one knew for sure why he had ice cream but we didn’t turn it down. I choose a blue bunny’s ice cream treat to fulfill my hunger.

As I began to open the ice cream treat the wrapper was cold and made crinkly noises. With the treat being cold and me opening it at the wrong it, it was hard to hold onto the treat.  Once I got the treat out of the package my mouth started watering in anticipation of eating the tasty ice cream treat.

I took the first bite and the outer cover crumbled and made a huge mess.  As I finished the rest of the treat, it was very tasty and left my hunger satisfied.  I was then left with just sticky hands and a wrapper to throw away.


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One response to “Tasty Ice Cream Treats!”

4 09 2012
  fuglsang (03:56:44) :

“Ice cream treats can be messy, tasty, a surprise, and a good treat all at the same time.” This gives you a nice set-up for the rest of the paragraph, Paige. Follow it with messy, tasty and surprising.

Keep in mind sensory detail. Show me messy, good taste and maybe even sticky.

When I picture “huge mess,” I’m reminded of a poster that used to be popular; a baby with a bowl of spaghetti upended on his/her head

http://www.google.com/search?q=baby+spaghetti+poster&hl=en&client=safari&rls=en&prmd=imvns&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ei=tHtFUO-vFabF2QXe0IHIDg&ved=0CCAQsAQ&biw=1004&bih=649

The first one.