Three Broadcast Stories

Football Broadcast

Here is my three final broadcast stories.

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  1. fuglsang’s avatar

    Natalie: Rehearse a bit more. You need to sound comfortable with the text.

    Good summary on the football story. Good ending. Identify your speakers each time. You repeat this style – breaking up the quotes – in all your stories. This won’t work all the time, and it’s generally better to use fewer longer bits rather than a bunch of short bits.

    Precipitation story: Come back to the Almanac and its predictions at the end. The story’s focus needs to be forward more than backward.

    The loans story still doesn’t give me much reason to be as optimistic as you suggest. It’s a complex issue, so maybe the story should be how Morningside helps students prepare to pay back loans. Broadcast stories need to be to the point. Focus on one thing.

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