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Couple Shoot

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  1. OK, a very imortant detail: Laurette is alive. She wasn’t killed.

    Inlcude a throwaway lead to catch the listener’s attention. Then the news that Laurette was shot, but is recovering at the hospital. Then tell them the details of the story.

    It’s good that you concluded the story (rather than ending with the soundbites). Introduce the soundbites separately.

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