11/05/2019 at 1:55 PM
The first line might be OK as a throwaway lead, but then you have to go to the real news lead: Laurette was shot on her wedding day.
Then how she is doing. Kenny’s disappeared. Then go into the “story” of what happened.
Use the attribution of Sgt Mann as a model.
The soundbites needed to be edited before being plugged into the story. You will have to do this with any sort of recorded material you collect, so be ready.
You are allowed to put emotion in your voice.
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