11/05/2019 at 1:49 PM
The first couple sentences sound like fragments. It cuts off early; after “surface” in the fifth graf. That may be a WordPress issue, but make sure you have the whole story before posting.
Attribution before the quotes.
A good reason to have your “talent” rehearse the story — and difficult words — before turning on the microphone.
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