The university president announces changes in the graduation requirements. A recent study showed that only 15 percent of students took a foreign language course and only 20 percent took a math course while attending Blackwater State University.
The new curriculum is set that students entering next fall (2023) must take one math, computer science, and foreign language course.
President David French exclaimed, “We feel that these new course requirements will allow us to turn our students into better-educated persons.”
The first sentence kind of fits as a lead. It needs to be finished:
BSU President Davis French announced changes in the graduation requirements for next fall.
Then the changes
Then the WHY.