Breaking News. Groom is missing after shooting newlywed wife.

Richard Brunson, 50, shot his newlywed bride, Laurette Kenny Brunson, 38, at their wedding reception Saturday.

Sargent Mann from the Sioux City Police force said this. (Insert sound.)

Brunson used a .22 caliber handgun on his wife at their home, located 617 Black Street.

Marilyn Corse a witness said, (insert sound)

Brunson’s whereabouts are still unknown.

As for Mrs. Brunson, she is recovering well at St. Luke’s Hospital. She was shot in her stomach.

And now on to other news.

1 thought on “CoupleShoot

  1. Use the attribution for Mann as a model for others.

    I would move Laurette’s status up. Include it before you tell the “story” so listeners know she’s OK.

    Good, tight sentences.

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