Friday Article 11-12-10

I think this article is pretty funny. The whole time I was reading the story I was picturing mom’s running from target to wall-mart trying to find the best deals. Although the story gave quality information about the difference between target and wall-mart, the story might have been better if they got quotes from actual moms looking for the best deals. The quotes would have added a conversational feel and draw the reader in more.

1 Comment so far

  1.   fuglsang on November 16th, 2010

    It’s definitely timely, considering the economy. But it also counts as a service/consumer feature. Hints to help shoppers and all that. Maybe they could find some “surgical shoppers” to interview.