It was 9:30am, and my roommates and I were about ready to leave the apartment. In a bright pink blazer comes K. K had the worst expression on her face and kept repeating that she wanted to send a strongly worded text to her boss.
See today is the most important day for Morningside, today is when the Yamanashi City delegates are coming. K is in charge of being master of ceremonies, but she wasn’t told until yesterday.
It took her an extra ten minutes to finish getting ready in the small four room apartment. Her boss on the other end of the text message didn’t seem too concerned. K was nearly late to class. As she exited my car to go to class, she muttered under her breath something about her boss.
Roommate’s name has been blurred out due to privacy.
“K was nearly late to class. As she exited my car to go to class, she muttered under her breath something about her boss.”
Good combo sentence. It’s showing something rather than telling.