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Shooting News (FICTIONAL)

What started as a joyous occasion ended in horror. About thirty relatives and friends were present for the wedding and reception of Richard Brunson and Laurette Kenny Brunson, including Laurette’s three children. Richard shot Laurette after she threw a plate of macaroni salad at him. Neighbor Walter Corse had this to say; (Walter soundbite)


According to hospital officials, Laurette is in good condition despite being shot in the abdomen. Walter’s mother was able to give a statement, and was mainly worried for Laurette’s children; (Marilyn soundbite)


If you have any information on Richard’s whereabouts, please contact the authorities.

1 Comment

  1. OK on the throwaway lead, Marcus, but then follow it with the stabbing. Then set the scene and describe the shooting. OK on intro of sources.

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